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Sword

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Forenkazan
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this is my first drawing

i hope i can get critiques so i can improve my drawings

program used: Photoshop cs 5
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1024x768px 267.71 KB
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 3.0 License
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World-Inside-Me
Here is your requested critique from :iconcriticentrum:

Positives:
> I really love the design on the sword handle, especially with the diamond shape in the middle.
> The shading looks really great too on the raised areas, again, the diamond in the middle looks particularly superb because of the tones there.

Improvements:
> I think more details would help with this, such as on the handle itself and the blue sections on the sword design.
> A little more toning, particularly on the blade itself would help it look more realistic too~

I hope this is helpful!